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Black Wings
A night? That doesn't sound so bad
but it was everything they had.
One night - and at the brink of day
be lucky to flee away.
One crate and one awaiting zoo,
be careful not to bring there doom.
It's hard when all the dangers loom
from above your past.
Think fast and see what it may take.
Choices only the brave can make.
Nightmare from which you can't just wake.
This fight might be your last.
So wait, I'll reveal everything.
It's over, you can't change a thing.
It may be tougher than you think
the story of those wings.
A night? That doesn't sound so bad
but it was everything they had.
One night - and at the brink of day
be lucky to flee away.
One crate and one awaiting zoo,
be careful not to bring there doom.
It's hard when all the dangers loom
from above your past.
Think fast and see what it may take.
Choices only the brave can make.
Nightmare from which you can't just wake.
This fight might be your last.
So wait, I'll reveal everything.
It's over, you can't change a thing.
It may be tougher than you think
the story of those wings.
It looks like Wattpad helps my art-productivity.
For the sake of posting my fanfic there, I've edited a chapter so far, redrew a cover and had to think of some story descrpition. My sister suggested me to write it as a poem - and why to post it only on Wattpad?
disclaimer: The characters portrayed in this poem are not mine.
For the sake of posting my fanfic there, I've edited a chapter so far, redrew a cover and had to think of some story descrpition. My sister suggested me to write it as a poem - and why to post it only on Wattpad?disclaimer: The characters portrayed in this poem are not mine.
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For some reason, this poem intrigues me, and I found this very pleasant to read.
Okay, now for my bit of critique. I feel the title needs a little work. In your description, you say these characters aren't yours, but you don't exactly say where their from. I checked your tags, and it doesn't say so there either. So you might wanna look into that. MY best guess, is it's from some web comic called New Life, but I can't be sure, since I just found it, and haven't read it.
Well, that ends my bit of critique, great work, and hope this was helpful.
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